Is kavita ke saare patrr kalpnik hain
Disclaimer --- This fictitious poem has 1st line inspired by VKG… and is truly one from imagination. Any relation with anyone living or dead is totally at reader’s behest. Don’t get personal n emotional. (Please)
Bored, confused, tired of spending ages in vacuum,
Perished by revolving around own axis,
Dizziness numbed my senses, paralyzed my innocent eyes.
Stranger yet, some mysterious charm was present there,
That was emotionally attracting me in despair.
So, for the first time among the crowd,
I found someone to think about.
Elegance, simplicity and purity of thought were her asset,
Her little smile on every meeting was keeping me at the behest.
Again I was elated, confused, shy, amazed of the recent happenings,
The new mystical subject was complex, to be understood in a lightening.
Friends was the message that got misjudged, miscalculated by friends.
Leaving me alone at command of waves in the middle of the deadly sea.
I lost the smile, the sheen and that ecstasy.
Yet again I was left back among the dark shadows of the crowd
And spent my few exquisite years in solitude.
Surrounded by the dark thunderous clouds for the unheard crying.
All hopes lost as this dark cloud lacked the silver lining.
THANK YOU
4 comments:
wow sharmaji, finally the disturbances in heart pouring out and what better way than poetry, but don't try to wrap things as if we were born yesterday.........."Love happens once dude, the rest is just life", so go ahead with it and discover the eternity of happiness......
wish you all the best......
@ akhilesh
think out of the box... u r again misguided by the essence of the poem. this meant something else . different people can have different perspective & u have got urself in the worst case scenario in the first attempt. try to figure it out again dear..
thank you
:)
@ pranjal
even u got it wrong by the way the poetm goes. The hidden meaning needs to be figured u & u know me better...
u should relate everything together to get the real meaning.
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