Sunday, September 19, 2010

***** IMMORTAL FEELINGS *******



N.B: Any relation with anyone living or dead is totally at reader’s behest. Don’t get personal n emotional. (Please.........) 

She conveyed her feelings secretly gathering all her courage. He had no response to it. Only change was exchanging of true smiles every time they saw each other.

A day before vacation, it was raining incessantly in the morning. A feeble attendance turned up for the class. Even the number of teacher witnessed a shortfall that day. So the school ended an hour earlier. The dark thunderous clouds were looping all over the sky. However the rain had stopped for a while. So the boy hurriedly gathered his bicycle for his way home. It was a long journey way back home through the woods. The heavy rain started pouring again within minutes as he left.  So he stopped under the shade of the tree. The thunderstorm had drenched him to the skin.He saw her shivering and moving towards the shade for some protection. Even she was completely drenched. 

They looked at each other shyly without exchanging a word. Seeing the brewing thunderstorm he offered her a lift on his cycle. She agreed to move ahead with him amidst the rain. Completely drenched they moved through the woods on the lonesome path. She could feel his warm breath on her neck as they moved ahead. The flex of his muscle touching her body as he paddled through captivated her thoughts. However they continued without exchanging a word. But the fire of love flared through their thumping hearts. Both of them could feel each other emotions even without uttering a word.

As Soon as they reached the façade of her home, he conveyed his response to the unanswered question. The question asked by her months ago gathering all her courage. She explained of her anxiety for the moment and planted a passionate gentle kiss on his cheek. Remaining speechless and holding each other hands, they kept on seeing each other. They wanted to talk to each other for long but were short of words now. The distant friendship had blossomed into love. Breaking the silence the boy promised to keep in touch during vacation as he was moving to LEH for visiting his parents.

Her family was out of town for a week. The loneliness was killing. However his voice on phone kept her some solace to her heart. For last two days she became restless as her calls remained unanswered.  Until this happened, the news of cloudburst destroying the LEH was being aired. Emergency helpline numbers were of no use. She kept on praying with her weeping heart in some hope for his survival. Suddenly she could hear some familiar voice calling her outside her house. Her prayers were answered as she saw him outside. She ran in his arms with her misty eyes. He explained that he had left LEH a day earlier before the disaster struck. Even he could not spend a day without seeing her. It was his feelings that saved him.

 “When you have true feelings for someone, the whole universe conspires to bring you together”


8 comments:

RAVI said...

hmmm bhai prem me giraft ho gaye???

Panchali Pratigya (पांचाली प्रतिज्ञा : खंडकाव्य) said...

kya baat hai sharma ji.... really heart touching...

RAKESH SHARMA said...

@ rajput

Thank uuuu

LIPAK.....Don't learn to HACK - HACK to learn said...

ultimate ..touching hearts...!!
pls find some time to keep writing like this...

LIPAK.....Don't learn to HACK - HACK to learn said...

just love ur writing..
lipu

RAKESH SHARMA said...

@ lipu
Will try 2 . This job life has taken away my freedom

LIPAK.....Don't learn to HACK - HACK to learn said...

hmmm.......
hope u r doing well

santosh said...

heart touching!!!! nothing else......
why are you hiding your talent ..."jago utho aur likho"....

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